I am crazy about galloping black stallions dazling in the sun.
                                 I am addicted to white pearly ponys rolling in the grass.
                                 
                                 I never tire of jumping caramel horses on winter stormy days.
                                 I can consume a can of bubbling clear sprite fizzing on my tongue.
                                 I wear peachy plain orangey jodphers to wear on a trotting horse in Automn.
                                 I love to eat golden chewey hard toffee that makes your baby teeth fall out.
                                 I like to smooch my soft grey burmes cat to death.
                                 I like pransing kittens dazling in the zizzling hot sun.
                                                                    By Rachael
 
Dear Rachael,
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderfully descriptive poem! I can see that you love animals - especially ponies and kittens. I like the way that you used a different colour for the text on each line - it makes it easy to read.
Love Mummy
Dear Rachael
ReplyDeletewhat a amazing poem you have done and I'm interested to hear some more. good job is well.
from Astoria.